Amidst the ocean of souls.
I met you.
Found warmth in the cloak of your embrace.
Solace in your presence.
You made me free.
To be my truest.
You made me believe.
I found my twin.
My long-lost one.
Innocent, clueless, fragile and wanting. I have fallen.
Danced with joy and gladness as I woke up in your arms.
As butterfly kisses caressed my being.
As you allowed me to be me.
I love you.
With all my soul.
Let it be forever.. as you seemed to flutter your wings to freedom once more.
As you left me thirsting for more.
But enough. Time says stop.
But my mind refused to adhere.
My heart longs for you, yearns for you, cries out for you.
I see you see me hurting. But knowingly gives in to time..
In your piece you are clear. I understand.
As it is for the best.
I face my reality.
Knowing in my heart and soul, you are there, found and would stay forever…
As time be our guide.
To eternity…
i can sense that you'r loving someone but time doesnt permit it to happen. but as long as you both are alive and are still capable of loving, there is still hope.
ReplyDeleteCute ng poem :)
ReplyDeleteThings happen...sometimes, we just have to be strong enough to accept that we can't hold a moment, or a person for the matter, forever... :)
ReplyDeleteThe reality of Love, it can bring you sky high but it can also let you crushing back to the ground. Of course, it's always a risk worth taking.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem, the last time I made one was for my mom.
ReplyDeleteThe poem sounded a bit sad.. :( It had me recalling a past long distance relationship. And as Franc mentioned, Loving takes a lot of risks too.
ReplyDeletesuch cute words and eye opener for new year!! great wiritng continue it for oyur readers! xx
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Very heartwarming. Thanks for sharing this one.
ReplyDeleteA sad poem, but this is life, no matter who we love and if it can't be permitted to still the world will revolve. I just hope you're still doing fine despite the case.
ReplyDeleteLove is indeed an emotion that's still a total mystery for me....It inspires us to write poems, it motivates us to see the world a lot more colorful, and it unconsciously gives a smile on our lips....The wonders of love - so awesome!
ReplyDeleteReading this poem reminds me of my previous relationships, especially the first one :(
ReplyDeleteLove. It brings happiness and sorrow, warmth and coldness, delight and aching..
Why so serious? haha. I am in love like you and I agree that it's not easy to fall in love. I guess you too have a boyfriend do you? ahaha. Well, God bless your relationship :)
ReplyDeleteI have read several time your poem for I was looking for something that you're poem is cute. What makes your poem cute? Is their a such thing as a cure poem? I wonder why some had said that it is a cute poem.
ReplyDeleteThe creator has provided you everything you need and even has set you free. In the course of your existence, you see Him as He suffered and you sympathize with Him. And in your distress, He is there to give you solace and eternal hope that He is forever be with you.
Though hindi gaanong maganda ang flow, but the message is so heartfelt. Love really conquers every obstacles that lies ahead of it.
ReplyDeleteLove is not always a bed of roses.Been to a lot of hurt aches. Now, I look back..."I remember the boys but I don't remember the feeling anymore" ( singing mode lang)
ReplyDeleteThat's one of the realities of love. Letting go is not that easly especially if your mind has been set that he/she is the one you'll spend the rest of your life with.
ReplyDeleteIn pain we derive pleasure such as the creation of this poem.
ReplyDeleteIt is nice that you have the gift of words to express your feelings. Some people have a hard time making it concrete for them what they really feel. You can on the other hand even express it as a form of art.
ReplyDeleteI've never felt what you are feeling now but I know how beautiful and painful at the same time to love. But now Im a little more matured I realized that I cannot love anyone more than I love myself. I love them, yes, but I don't need them to make me complete.
Jeez! I think we have the same sentiments. Reading your poem is like hearing my own thoughts. Whatever happens, never hinder yourself from loving. Ang sarap ma-inlove! <3
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